WuWuWuWuWu! *runs away with his fish*
Nice take on this
because ive lost faith in myself
Strong perspective. Although I wonder if the front wheel is hovering above the ground?
Ah yes, the cast shadow is indeed weird around the front wheel, thanks for the pointer!
Is the tail curled towards the viewer?
The body language and view are quite nice! Also the idea of different light sources - but in my opinion the sky should be darker so that the overall light is less bright. Otherwise the strong reflections of the orange light seem too much, especially over such a distance. Also, the colour of the sheet of paper more or less lets it "move" to the background, because the colours match too well and the paper is besides the next distinguishable object, the lamp. Not overlapping it.
The white light from the left and on the plaza (or what you call it) are working well to me.
Now that was more than I intended to write. But it came to mind ;)
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